Rework of logo for aesthetics.

Hi

I am seeking the help of a classically trained graphic to work on a logo for a business. Must possess college degree in graphic design.

By way of background Debra Brooks Corporation intends to market high end casual and sport inspired rubber sole shoes. I described what I wanted and had a graphic designer build it for me. However, some aspects of the configuration need work and I need someone to take over and finish it. I have all the art work incl the AI, JPG source PSD, etc.

Attached is a copy of the work. I have chosen # 5.

What does not work

The OO look like two eyes sticking out, they need to be softened.

Part of the K has different weights and need to be balanced and does the S.

And, generally anything that you feel would enhance the image to make it balanced and aesthetically pleasing.

Thanks for your consideration.